What do you think of this song I wrote?

Although not quite finished I wanted to post this as to see what others thought of this,

For starters the chords for this song are so far,

Verses: E major, E minor, D major, D major with a suspended fourth

Chorus: E major, A minor, E major, A minor, G major, G minor, F major then repeat and go back to the chords for the verses

Lyrics:

The World Is Not Enough:

Verse one:
I don’t believe in mass confusions
Is this all their really is
I don’t know right from wrong
Can you please show me how
And don’t you know
That love is not enough
To save us from ourselves
And all you’ve got
Is all we’ll ever need

Verse two:
I dont believe in a today
For all we are is yet to be
I don’t know
How far we’ve come
All the dirt
Outweighs the gold
Build me a castle
In fallen grace
Our lonely hours
Sculpt to solace

Verse three:
I don’t believe in illusion
Our hearts are hard easy to find
I don’t know what war today
Has been fought and truly won
Tell me again
Why are we here
This worlds a shell
A place called home

Verse four:
I don’t believe in fixed chaos
The fires’ll burn to endless ends
I don’t know the peace in store
My home lies their
Easy and undisturbed
In my palms
Watch the rivers flow
And put on the shows
For us to greet

Verse five:
I don’t believe in constant rates
Lifes a flux made easy to believe
I don’t know my own self
In the fields barren and sown
A garden of trees
The only green
Our coming of age
And final grace

Chorus:
The world is not enough
Time waits in luxury
The world is not enough
Can’t you see it true
It’s not enough

I should note that this is a dark sort of electric folk song and what do you think of the lyrics and the chord changes overall, and yes I will eventually add more chord changes to the verses

How can i make this essay better??? 10 POINTS BEST ANSWER!!!!?

How can I make this essay better? It would be nice if you could just copy paste and make the corrections. I just need help with sentence tructure….etc. first answer with this formath get’s 10 points!!!

“Ricki the valiant, the true, Ticki with the eyeballs of flame!” Darzee, the bird, serenaded to Ricki, a small mongoose who is filled from head to toe with braveness, curiosity, and dedication. Who would have ever thought that a small animal could be a savior? It all started when Ricki was washed up onto the garden path of the estate, where Teddy, the boy who lived on the estate, found him. In this short story “Ricki Ticky Tavi,” Ruyard Kipling expresses how Ricki uses his mongoose senses to defeat the terrible, evil creatures that lurk behind the bushes- Nag and Nagina, the 2 cobras. From making new friends, to making new foes, Ricki embarks on a new adventure that makes him realize that at times, you need to jeopardize your own life for others.
A mongoose is usually filled from the tip of their nose to toe with curiosity, and Ricki was a true mongoose. “For it is the hardest thing in the world to frighten a mongoose, for he is eaten head to toe with curiosity.” If it wasn’t for Ricki’s curiosity, would he have discovered whom Darzee, the bird, and Nag, the evil snake was? Would he have found Chachundra the muskrat and unearthed the duo’s plans? Would he have unmasked Nagina’s batch of eggs? Throughout the story, many more occurrences occur where Ricki’s curiousity shines through. For instance, in the night middle of the night, Ricki couldn’t sit still, so he went exploring around the night, where he came across Nag and Nagina. “For in the bathroom there were Nag and Nagina, discussing the plans for revenge.” This way, Ricki got to know what the devious snake duo was up to-, which made it easier to destroy them. You can clearly see how the mongoose’s curiosness helps him in life.
Throughout the story Ricky’s characteristics shine through. Even though he is eaten up head to toe with curiosity, he is also known for his dedication. Ricki could have easily quit trying to kill Nag and Nagina , but he kept going on. If it weren’t for Ricky, the world would be in despair and the cobras would have still been alive. From this, it is easy evident that Ricki has a great amount of valor in his heart. As the story runs on, the little mongoose strives to protect Teddy and his family. In the one dark night, when the 2 cobras were lurking around in the bathroom, Ricki heard them talking about plans on how to kill the family. “At the bathroom of the smooth plaster wall, there was a brick pulled to make a a sluice for the bath water, and Nag and Nagina were hissing outside.” If Ricky hadn’t heard this, then he wouldn’t have went to all lengths to protect the family.
His eyes burned with anger. Ricki had enough of Nag and Nagina. Another trait that Ruyard Kipling supplied Ricki with is bravery. He is filled from head to toe with courage, another mongoose trait. For instance, in the bathroom, Ricki ahd shown a great amount of bravery. “ Ricky Ticki tangled all over with rage. Should he strike on the neck, or the tail?” This obviously shows bravery- a great amount. If Ricki hadn’t bit Nag, then Nag would have still been around, tormenting everyone. Well Nag is gone, but what about Nagina? Ricki used his courage on Nagina too. By bribing Nagina, Ricki-Ticki got what he wanted and defeated the snakes for once and for all.
Through all the adventures Ricki’s been through, from making new friends, to defeating enemies, Ricki put his life in jepordy to protect his loved ones. This story just shows that at times, it is necessary to put your life in front of others.

Song I wrote what do you think of it overall?

Although not quite finished I wanted to post this as to see what others thought of this,

For starters the chords for this song are so far,

Verses: E major, E minor, D major, D major with a suspended fourth

Chorus: E major, A minor, E major, A minor, G major, G minor, F major then repeat and go back to the chords for the verses

Lyrics:

The World Is Not Enough:

Verse one:
I don’t believe in mass confusions
Is this all their really is
I don’t know right from wrong
Can you please show me how
And don’t you know
That love is not enough
To save us from ourselves
And all you’ve got
Is all we’ll ever need

Verse two:
I dont believe in a today
For all we are is yet to be
I don’t know
How far we’ve come
All the dirt
Outweighs the gold
Build me a castle
In fallen grace
Our lonely hours
Sculpt to solace

Verse three:
I don’t believe in illusion
Our hearts are hard easy to find
I don’t know what war today
Has been fought and truly won
Tell me again
Why are we here
This worlds a shell
A place called home

Verse four:
I don’t believe in fixed chaos
The fires’ll burn to endless ends
I don’t know the peace in store
My home lies their
Easy and undisturbed
In my palms
Watch the rivers flow
And put on the shows
For us to greet

Verse five:
I don’t believe in constant rates
Lifes a flux made easy to believe
I don’t know my own self
In the fields barren and sown
A garden of trees
The only green
Our coming of age
And final grace

Chorus:
The world is not enough
Time waits in luxury
The world is not enough
Can’t you see it true
It’s not enough

I should note that this is a dark sort of electric folk song and what do you think of the lyrics and the chord changes overall, and yes I will eventually add more chord changes to the verses

How do I complete my essay 150 points seriously!!!?

ok so here it is so far:
Lily and Charlotte had been competitors since infancy. They had been in swimming races, singing competitions and even boxing bouts against each other. However Lily and Charlotte weren’t just ordinary sisters; they were identical twins. Both had long blonde hair, sparkling blue eyes, were 22 years old and 175 centimetres tall. This meant that it must have been a hard job for the judges at the beauty pageant that they had both competed in last week. Luckily the job was made easier because it was not only a competition on beauty- it was judged on brains and character also.
Last week was the beauty section of pageant and they were excitedly waiting for the next day to come so that they could go for their interview. They had been put together in the same interview, since their beauty score was exactly the same and they had won with a tie. Now there were depending on their brains and character to win.
*Ring-Ring Ring-Ring* “Hello!” said Lily as she picked up the phone.
Wham! Charlotte pushed her away and took the phone before listening attentively.
“Hi is this Lily and Charlotte Debbs, the girls from the pageant?” said an amiable man.
“Yes it is Charlotte but we like to be called Charlotte and Lily since I am older by 20 minutes” she lied proudly.
“Well Ok Charlotte we have scheduled your interview into 10o’clock tomorrow morning. You will first complete an intellectual test, where it will mostly be about logic and thinking. It will be quite difficult too so I suggest you study. This is the brains section of the pageant. Then later you will be judged on your character. To obtain a high score you will have to display kindness, patience and tolerance. Please tell your sister this information, since you own the same telephone and live together” he explained. Also, if you don’t get there on time unfortunately you will be eliminated from the pageant. Do you understand?”
“Yes. Goodbye!” she said hurriedly.
“So, what did he say?” asked Lily suspensefully.
“Oh, not much…Just how we have to get there at 10o’clock but nothing else that will interest you” Charlotte slyly replied. . “Oh really…is that all?” Lily replied doubtfully. Charlotte smiled innocently but her eyes did not follow suit. Lily glimpsed something sinister within her, something dark and cruel.
“I’m going to my room to study for the brains test tomorrow. Though you shouldn’t worry because the man on the phone said it was going to be a very simple test and you are so brainy that you will have no problem with it!” beguiled the surreptitious sister.

What I want to happen next is for the next mornign Charlotte sets the alarm to 9:40am so that Lily is late and might get eliminated. Also she dyed her hair bright green( it is an half an hourse drive away)As Charlotte walks past the neighbours house sat 9:30 she sees her elderly neighbour crying out for help however as she is mean, she walks past doing nothing. Lily wakes up rushing and she is about to rush off to the studio except she sees that her neghbour has broken her ankle while gardening. Lily is nice so she rings 000(they live in Australia) and then comes with her to the hospital on a private helicoter since the hospital is far away and the old lady is in need of serious medical help(fortunately it is close to the studio where the interview is). Lily stays for 10 minutes but tells her neighbour she has to go(shes really late now). Now she knows that the trip should only take 2 minutes by taxi to the studio but it is high traffic and the trip ends up takeing 10 minutes. Finally she gets there and she is (work out the maths no. of minutes- you have to write it in)late. However during her taxi ride to the studio the old lady had rung the studio to tell them all the trouble that she had went to to help the old lady, even if it ment losing the competition. The test (for brains section) is already half way through and so she has no chance. in the end though her brains section is only the score of 4/10 (sister gets 8/10)she gets 10/10 for character (sister gets 3/10 for charcter) and she wins! Evil twin could help but expose her true feelings and emotions, that she was always losing and it wasnt fairDespite Charlotte being mean Lily learns to forgive and that it didnt matter whether she won or not. The only thing that mattered was her relationship with her twin sister. From then on Lily made sure that Charlot did her and succeded. They became friends to each other

Please please finish this. The first person to finsih it will get 150 points. All you have to do is rewrite the bit after where I am up to but write it like a story and make it quite interesting like I have done so far. It doesnt have to be extravagant though! Also the first person to finish will be having the’ best answer’ award and I will always answer your questions fully(checking regularly) it is really easy. and make it year 8 standard or more please! so that it can impress the teacher.

What do you think of this song I wrote?

Although not quite finished I wanted to post this as to see what others thought of this,

For starters the chords for this song are so far,

Verses: E major, E minor, D major, D major with a suspended fourth

Chorus: E major, F major, E major, F major, G major, G minor, F major then repeat

Lyrics:

The World Is Not Enough:

Verse one:
I don’t believe in mass confusions
Is this all their really is
I don’t know right from wrong
Can you please show me how
And don’t you know
That love is not enough
To save us from ourselves
And all you’ve got
Is all we’ll ever need

Verse two:
I dont believe in a today
For all we are is yet to be
I don’t know
How far we’ve come
All the dirt
Outweighs the gold
Build me a castle
In fallen grace
Our lonely hours
Sculpt to solace

Verse three:
I don’t believe in illusion
Our hearts are hard easy to find
I don’t know what war today
Has been fought and truly won
Tell me again
Why are we here
This worlds a shell
A place called home

Verse four:
I don’t believe in fixed chaos
The fires’ll burn to endless ends
I don’t know the peace in store
My home lies their
Easy and undisturbed
In my palms
Watch the rivers flow
And put on the shows
For us to greet

Verse five:
I don’t believe in constant rates
Lifes a flux made easy to believe
I don’t know my own self
In the fields barren and sown
A garden of trees
The only green
Our coming of age
And final grace

Chorus:
The world is not enough
Time waits in luxury
The world is not enough
Can’t you see it true
It’s not enough

I should note that this is a dark sort of electric folk song and what do you think of the lyrics and the chord changes overall, and yes I will eventually add more chord changes to the verses

please help with easy math question!!!!!!!!!!!!! 10 point best answer!!!!!!!?

Sol made a scale drawing of his triangular vegetable garden so that he could plan how to plant it. Two sides of the garden are 10m and 12 m and they for a 50 degree angle. He drew a 50 degree angle on paper and drew legs of 20 cm and 24 cm. What is the length of the third side of his garden?

thank you and explain how you got ur answer !!!!!!

10 p best answer